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Events - Kirsten, Jessica, Titan, Claire #1

The kids noticed the maple syrup. It froze all over the street. It looked like brown ice. Everyone gets feet stuck. The students decide to help. The k ids get their feet out of their boots, and then got their backpacks off their backs and put their skates on and when Jessica was putting on her skates she found a marker and wrote on the maple syrup. She wrote HELP!!! Nobody came so they had to go to different people's houses and asked for help them nobody helped them.

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